Правильно ли расставлены предложения в английском тексте? Здесь в перемешку: Reminder Letter Enclosed is a copy of the original contract for your convenience. / Dear LeRoy, / I’m sending you this note as a reminder to renew your Cleaning and Maintenance Contract with us. / Recognizing your very busy schedule, / I’m sincerely looking forward to/ I hope you have been more than satisfied / receiving your renewal./ Regards, Dax Cheng / Would you please have your assistant drop me a note or phone/ if you require further information Мой вариант: Dear LeRoy, I’m sending you this note as a reminder to renew your Cleaning and Maintenance Contract with us. Recognizing your very busy schedule, I’m sincerely looking forward to I hope you have been more than satisfied receiving your renewal. Would you please have your assistant drop me a note or phone if you require further information. Enclosed is a copy of the original contract for your convenience. Regards, Dax Cheng.
Ваш вариант правильно составлен.